Fabulous Cordy (Angel Spin Off)

[Nicole Rodriguez]

[glow=green,2,300]Fabulous Cordy[/glow] Angel Spin Off

SUMMARY
Cordelia has awoken from her a coma, to find that everything is not the way she left it. She is in search of her closest group of friends, Fred, Wesley, Angel, Gunn, and Lorne, but she has not seen any of them in her search through out L.A. Cordelia had searched in Wolfram & Hart, to find that it had exploded. Something had gone wrong, and she knew it. After a long while of searching she comes to realize that there is no way that she could possibly find them, and heads to New York City, where she starts her own gang of friends, that fight evil. Though she is with her new friends, she is still in search of her old ones. Will she ever re connect with the fang gang? Who are her new friends? How will this all end? Cordelia Chase has two missions. Help the helpless, and find her friends. With the help of her new friend Sabrina, Slater, Trinity, and Aaron, they will conquer all things in their way.

STARRING


Charisma Carpenter as Cordelia Chase


Scarlett Johansson as Sabrina Danes


Brad Pitt as Slater Mcdonald


Zhang Zi Yi as Trinity Bell


Chris Olivero as Aaron Dexter


David Boreanaz as Angel


Amy Acker as Illyria


J. August Richards as Charles Gunn


James Marsters as Spike

Fabulous Cordy Series : Angel Spin Off. There would be 12 episodes a season.

[Jack D. Malone]

I want! I want!
I love your pitch! Cordelia is the best. I hope you get picked up.
XD

[Chris Davis]

Now here's what I like to see!!! A descriptive, exciting, and colorful pitch for a original and creative series! I love Cordy and your characters fo this look like they would make a pretty interesting team
Like I said, I love Cordy...see is my 2nd favorite character ever!

Best wishes to this series and I like what I see so far

[AWESOME]

OMG OMG OMG this show is going to be great its seems to be great!

[whedonversefan]

I agree- I definitely want to see this series


Best wishes,

Scott

[khurd16]

This is a good pitch idea
I hope it gets picked up

[Brian Melanson]

I love the IDEA I love CORDY and I love the name too. Very clever

[Brian Melanson]

Hey i was wondering if you had a pilot i would like to see more of Cordelia. Shes my girl!

[Nicole Rodriguez]

Pilots up now

[Brian Melanson]

What can i say the episode is amazing i could not stop laughing at what cordy was doing I hope you get picked up can't wait for it!

[Chris Davis]

Presentation:

The font and overall structure of the pitch kinda threw me off at first but as I read on, I really got into the script and overlooked that fact. But next you should used Courier New as your font. It just looks a lot more professional.

Characters:

You did an excellent job with the original jossverse characters. I believe Spike and Angel's dialogue between the two characters were right on point! I really felt that you studied those characters very well and when it came down to it you delivered a great connection to Whedon's style and yours. Your non-jossverse characters were good to, I felt that Cordy and Sabrina had numerous things in common but I could still have been able to seperate the two as different characters and I think that's important.

Longevity:
Your outstanding characters and dialogue have opened up thoughts in my head about this series which means I would love to see more and I am interested to find out how the other characters will come into the series.


THE VERDICT:

8.0/10

The script was a little short but it is only the pilot. I want to see what happens next so, that's a huge thumbs up for Fabulous Cordy. Let me deliberate with my other show runners and I will be back with a final decision in regards to your series' future on VPN!

[Jack D. Malone]

I completely agree with everything Chris said. This has a LOT of potential and a LOT of characters to keep everyone entertained and interested in the amazing plot you've set up and I for one loved it. Again, the format and length should change, understanding that this is a pilot script, and I'd give it about an 8/10 as well.

[Brian Melanson]

I agree with Jack and Chris this was amazing some things needed to be tweeked by over all it was amazing i loved IT!

[Chris Davis]

So, judging by the comments by Jack and Brian, I'm thinking they loved it as well and we all know what that means! Fabulous Cordy has been picked up to air on VPN! I will send you a pm to talk about your contract! Congratulations and welcome to the VPN Writing Staff!

[Nicole Rodriguez]

Thankyou so much! I'm excited