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Post by Jack D. Malone on Jul 19, 2009 23:32:46 GMT -5
I suggest you use a script writing program. It's hard to read when its not in the official format. I think that's the problem. I, myself, have not read it because of that, sorry. But I really do love your pitch XD
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Post by khurd16 on Jul 20, 2009 0:11:06 GMT -5
Okay i will try to do that  Okay i switched the link around hopefully it works |
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Post by khurd16 on Jul 22, 2009 9:52:38 GMT -5
Alright. This time i have the right link working this time.
Hopefully you guys like my pilot.
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Post by Matthew James on Jul 22, 2009 12:06:27 GMT -5
Yeah the link worked but, but the writing is really hard to read and to small
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Post by khurd16 on Jul 22, 2009 12:50:05 GMT -5
hmmmm do u want me to make it bigger?
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Post by Matthew James on Jul 22, 2009 15:13:14 GMT -5
Ha yah I think making it bigger would help.
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Post by khurd16 on Jul 23, 2009 9:39:48 GMT -5
Okay what do u think of it now?lol
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Post by Brian Melanson on Jul 23, 2009 9:56:40 GMT -5
Hey the script is still very hard to read. Its just that I don't know when everyone is talking. So I would still get a writing program that works and is free like Celtx
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Post by Jack D. Malone on Jul 23, 2009 10:42:24 GMT -5
Hey the script is still very hard to read. Its just that I don't know when everyone is talking. So I would still get a writing program that works and is free like Celtx Its not that its hard to read. Its just not what we're used to. The way you write your scripts with the "Name Here: Dialogue follows on after" is a bit unfamiliar to us. It would be a hell of a lot more easier if you wrote it in the script style. But, you shouldn't NOT have your script read because of that. The story is what counts, so I'll give it a read over this weekend and come back with a review |
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Post by Brian Melanson on Jul 23, 2009 11:00:30 GMT -5
Same Here I'll give it a try
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Post by Chris Davis on Aug 2, 2009 13:04:47 GMT -5
I plan on reading the pilot today. So, I'll give you a review when I'm done.
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Post by khurd16 on Aug 3, 2009 0:22:59 GMT -5
Hopefully u like the pilot Chris
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Post by khurd16 on Aug 13, 2009 11:54:28 GMT -5
Sorry that this pilot sucks so much.
I will redo it when i have the chance. I am working on episodes 3 and 4 right now
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Post by khurd16 on Aug 20, 2009 0:08:32 GMT -5
ALRIGHT BOYS AND GIRLS THE MODIFIED AND HOPEFULLY GOOD EPISODE ONE IS UP AND HOPEFULLY READY TO READ
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Post by khurd16 on Aug 20, 2009 10:08:08 GMT -5
UPDATED: I just redid the pilot again. And now its up
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